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QUESTION
How do you determine if a word is a compound word? Would today and/or because be considered compound?

Thank you in advance.

SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Little Egg Harbor, New Jersey Mon, Apr 19, 1999
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
It depends on your definition of compound word, I suppose. By the strictest definition, yes, those two are compound words because they're composed of parts that are identifiable words. I think that most writers, however, reserve the notion and name of "compound word" for words that are made up of words in such a way that the very act of compounding becomes, in fact, problematical; e.g., when do we put a hyphen between time and sensitive in time-sensitive? how does a screen door become a screen-door or a screendoor? what happens when a six-year-old turns seven years old? etc.

QUESTION
Is the following one okay (to be used as a headline):
Wake Up America: How to Learn More About Sleep Disorders
(Wake Up America is a national program)
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Schifferstadt, Germany Tue, Apr 20, 1999
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
I think you'd be better off with a gerund phrase as opposed to the noun phrase you've got now:
Wake Up America: Learning About Sleep Disorders
Or something like "Wake Up America: Sleep Disorder Programs in the United States"?

QUESTION
I am also confused by this type of construction:
  • Isaac Newton was the smartest person of all time.
    or
  • Isaac Newton is the smartest person of all time.
I know that he is dead, but it still seems strange to say "was." Which sentence is right?
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Princeton, New Jersey Tue, Apr 20, 1999
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
Since this is being expressed as a kind of general truth (whether it is, in fact, true or not doesn't really matter), using the present tense is OK. See the section on Verb Tenses.

QUESTION
Could you answer which one is correct and give me a reference on your website.
  1. Its function is similar to what is available on advanced photo cameras.
  2. Its function is similar to that on advanced photo cameras.
Thanks
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Moscow, Russia Tue, Apr 20, 1999
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
I can't give you a reference to what we have in the Guide on this issue; I'm not aware that the issue is addressed. The word "that" is simply not adequate here; we need the noun clause "what is available" to make it clear what we are comparing—this function to what is available elsewhere. Left as is, the reader will ask "that what?"

QUESTION
We are having a debate at work. What is the proper way to address an envelope. Does the PO Box go before the street address? and where should the Suite or Room Number appear. I have been addressing my letters in the following manner:

Mr. Paul Smith
Electronics Corporation
P.O. Box 46
23 Main Street
Boston, MA 02101
Also where does the Suite go?

Ms. Ana Jones
Wigets Are Us
Suite 45
10 Maple St
Natick, MA 01760
Thank you for your help.
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Natick, Massachusetts Tue, Apr 20, 1999
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
I highly recommend the U.S. Postal Services publication (which you will need an Acrobat Reader to download and open) called Postal Addressing Standards. It's a biggie—800+ kilobytes and 128 pages—but well worth the wait. (It's available from what's called the Postal Explorer, which provides several other publications from the U.S. Post Office. The answers to your questions are as follows:
ANA JONES
WIDGETS ARE US
10 MAPLE ST STE 4510
NATICK MA 01760

PAUL SMITH
ELECTRONICS CORPORATION
PO BOX 46
BOSTON MA 02101

The U.S. Post Office prefers all uppercase letters, although readable lowercase is permitted. Notice the lack of commas and other punctuation marks, as well as the absence of Mr., Ms., etc. Finally, of course, the Post Office greatly encourages the use of the nine-digit zip codes. I don't see any examples for addresses that include both a street address and a post office box number.

QUESTION
Some surnames in many languages include a preposition that usually translates to English of. Examples of this are, from German, Wernher Von Braun, from Dutch, Vincent van Gogh, from French, Simone de Beauvoir, from Spanish, Lope de Vega and from Italian, Joe DiMaggio. There is a term for this element in names; do you know what it is? (Hint: If you give us the correct answer, we'll think very "nobly" of you.)

The above question came up on a language quiz. Do you know the answer, or perhaps you could refer me to someone who can. Thank you,

SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Unknown Wed, Apr 21, 1999
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
The Chicago Manual of Style calls these words (which are often prepositions meaning "of") particles. But I have a feeling there are other words for them, depending on what language you're referring to, etc. Also, that answer doesn't seem to ring any bells with your hint.

Authority: Chicago Manual of Style 14th ed. U of Chicago P: Chicago. 1993. p. 742.

A helpful reader tells us this element is called a "nobiliary particle." So now we know.


QUESTION
Please clarify the use of more than versus over regarding numerical amounts.
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
New York, New York Wed, Apr 21, 1999
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
According to Burchfield, this is a peculiarly American hangup. In the U.S., we write more than when we mean in excess of or greater than ("There are over more than fifty warplanes in the sky at any one time."), and we use over in that context only when referring to age. "He's over fifty." Apparently, there is no such prejudice against over in the UK.

Authority: The New Fowler's Modern English Usage edited by R.W. Burchfield. Clarendon Press: Oxford, England. 1996.


QUESTION
Is there a preferred usage as between the two following forms, probably both acceptable; and if so, what is the authority and general rule?
  • Since World War II, 35 million people—90 percent of them civilians—have been killed in wars.
  • Since World War II, 35 million people—90 percent civilian—have been killed in wars.
This question has two independent parts: the "of them" part, which we expect may be sheer preference, and the "civilian" (adjective) vs. "civilians" (noun) part, which we think may be subject to a stronger preference or grammatical rule.

This sentence will appear in a document that will be widely circulated around the world, with several contributing authors, who strongly disagree on the matter. We would greatly appreciate any help you can give.

SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Cambridge, Massachusetts Wed, Apr 21, 1999
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
The problem with "90 percent civilian" is that it sounds like each individual of the 35 million was composed of a peculiar mixture of nine parts civilian and one part—well, whatever. The first version has no such ambiguity. I don't think there's much contest: go with #1. Seize the keyboards of the contributing authors who disagree with that.

QUESTION
From your Rules for Comma Usage page, Rule #1:
"Using a comma between all the items in a series, including the last two avoids this problem."
My question: Shouldn't there be a comma after the word "two"?
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Pasadena, California Wed, Apr 21, 1999
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
Wow, that's embarrassing! What a place to have a mistake in comma usage! I've fixed the error and I thank you for pointing it out to me. This is one of those moments when I'm very happy this is not a hard-copy document. I can still fix things.

QUESTION
I have a doubt regarding the use of the word "substitution". For example: substitution of margarine for butter. What does it mean:
  1. I'll use margarine instead of butter? or
  2. I'll use butter instead of margarine?
Which one will be displaced? Margarine or Butter?

Sorry for the inconvenience, but although it seems a simple question it has created a great confusion in my work. I'd very much appreciate your help.

Thanks

SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Manaus, Amazonas, Brazil Thu, Apr 22, 1999
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
It means you'll use margarine instead of butter. Once you get the role of the prepositions straight, it will seem easier.

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