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QUESTION
Could you please help me with this CNN report on the Kosovo crisis titled "Monitors leave Kosovo under threat of airstrikes"
In convoys of 10 or 11 bright orange vehicles, international cease-fire monitors, diplomats and aid workers departed Kosovo early Saturday as NATO forces readied for possible airstrikes. Evacuees began gathering before dawn, loading the vehicles with flak jackets, helmets, food and blankets for the trip across the border to Macedonia. Evacuation of the 1,400 OCSE monitors was ordered after Kosovo peace talks in Paris collapsed Friday.
Why did the author not use "the" before the Kosovo peace talks in Paris?

Many thanks in advance for all your help

SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Santa Croce Sull'Arno (Pisa), Italy Sun, Mar 21, 1999
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
I would refer you to our section on Articles. When they are generic, non-count nouns and sometimes plural count-nouns are used without articles. Having said that, however, I must add that I would have used "the" before Kosovo peace talks.

QUESTION
Please let me know which is correct....
  • A Easter Wish for you
  • An Easter Wish for you.
The card that made for my parents from a computer program that I have had pre-set text and said....A Easter Wish. When they received it the only thing my mother had to say was that I made a mistake in grammar. I told her that was part of the program and the text was already pre-set. Thanks!
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Warwick, Rhode Island Sun, Mar 21, 1999
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
I guess to please Mom next time, you'll have to scrawl an "n" in there. Surely the writers of that computer program wouldn't write "We looked out a east window." or "She is a Easter Islander." Well, maybe they would.

QUESTION
How would you decide whether a sentence with a participial phrase (or clause) a simple sentence or a complex sentence ?
Example: Frightened by her parents' shouting angrily at each other, the little girl cried out loudly.
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Songkhla, Thailand Mon, Mar 22, 1999
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
I don't think there is such a thing as a participial clause. Whether a sentence is simple or complex is determined the nature and number of clauses within it. A sentence with at least one dependent clause along with its (at least one) independent clause, is complex. A sentence with only one independent clause and no dependent clauses is a simple sentence. The participial phrase you use -- "Frightened by her parents' shouting angrily at each other" -- is not a clause because it contains no subject-verb relationship. See the section on phrases, clauses, and sentence types.

QUESTION
Is it grammatically incorrect to use the construction "you all" or "your all" when referring to a group of people?
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Atlanta, Georgia Mon, Mar 22, 1999
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
I can't see how "your all" is going to work, ever, but I suppose it's possible to use "you all" in a certain context. If you're talking about the American southern dialect use of "you-all" (pronounced "y'all" or something like that), I would not choose to use that, ever, in formal or academic prose. However, in trying to stress the "allness" of a group, you might write something like "If I wanted you all to come at the same time, I would have told you so." But nearly always a simple "you" will suffice.

QUESTION
Can you shed some light on the issue of sentence modifiers such as hopefully, regretfully, unfortunately, really, luckily. We're particularly interested in what is correct as opposed to what is common usage. Please first advise on the incorrect usage of the word hopefully as a sentence modifier.
e.g. "Hopefully, she'll see the light and stop using this word incorrectly." as opposed to "She looked hopefully to the Pope for her salvation."
Pleas also advise on the use of other sentence modifiers.
eg: "Regretfully, the weather was bad, so she stayed home and worked on her knitting."
Thank you
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Zagreb, Croatia Tue, Mar 23, 1999
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
There's nothing wrong with your use of "hopefully" as a sentence modifier in your first example. (In the second example, of course, it's not a sentence modifier; it's directly modifying only the verb, "looked.") However, I must add that so many people get riled up over the use of the word "hopefully" as a sentence modifier that it's almost not worth using it. What we have to look out for with "regretfully," however, is that we mustn't confuse it with "regrettably." It is regrettable, not regretful, that the weather was bad, so if we're going to use a sentence modifier there, we're going to use "regrettably." However, if a sentence modifier does not appropriately modify the entire sentence (and that may be true if you mean to suggest that she stayed home "regretfully" and not "regrettably"), then we shouldn't use the sentence modifier at all.

QUESTION
Which is (more) correct? Why?
  • "The program is available only to education employees?"
    or
  • "The program is available only to educational employees?"
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Eden Prairie, Minnesota Tue, Mar 23, 1999
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
These employees are engaged in educational projects and they use educational devices (like books, computers, chalkboards), but they are education employees. There is nothing inherently educational about them; what's educational is what they do.

QUESTION
I'm having a disagreement with a co-worker and thought you could help.

When writing the time of 12:00 I say it should be 12:00 a.m. or p.m. (depending on noon or midnight) My co-worker says there is no such thing as a.m. or p.m. in regards to 12:00 and that the correct way to write it is to just put noon or midnight. I disagree, who is right?

Thanks for your help.

SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Old Bridge, New Jersey Tue, Mar 23, 1999
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
Your co-worker has a point. When you say 12 a.m., so many people are confused by that and mistakenly think it means midnight, that it's a good idea to say 12 noon instead (and 12 midnight for 12 p.m.). So your way of saying it is certainly not wrong, but so many people will be confused by it, that it's better to avoid the p.m. and a.m. when talking about twelve o'clock and use noon and midnight instead.

QUESTION
Is "just as...so" considered a correlative conjunction?
(For example: JUST AS there are fashion trends, SO are there food trends.)
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Birmingham, Alabama Wed, Mar 24, 1999
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
[E-Mail Icon]I have never seen "just as. . . . so" listed among the correlative conjunctions, but it does seem to work the same way as "not only . . . . but also," doesn't it? Sometimes, though, the "so" doesn't seem to go along with the "just as." One could easily rewrite your sentence as "Just as there are fashion trends, there are food trends." But I think your usage is correct and useful. i will leave an e-mail icon here in case someone else has something to offer on this issue.

QUESTION
Why do you always write adjectives of nationality with a capital letter?

Thank you for your time.

SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Palma Campania, Naples - Italy Wed, Mar 24, 1999
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
I don't know. It's one of the very few ways that English is a polite language—in this case, more polite than most other languages.

QUESTION
This questions is about written forms of the year 2000. In an academic year, we use "the 1998-99" school year. Next year, should it be written as "1999-00" or "1999-2000"?
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Poway, California Wed, Mar 24, 1999
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
Good question, and it's really not a grammar question, of course. Isn't leaving out some of the digits what got us into the Y2k mess? I'd go with 1999–2000, but only because the "00" looks dumb to me. I see it on my credit card, already, so it's something I'd better get used to. Here's your chance to be a trend-setter. Very shortly, we'll all be as comfortable with "00" as we are with 98 and 99. There aren't that many folks around who can remember what we did last time. Sorry I can't be more helpful.

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