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QUESTION I have a question about direct and ind. objects. If I say..... "He decided to call Lisa in order to ask her if she wanted to go for a walk," what is the direct object, "Lisa" or "if whe wanted to go for a walk"? any more info. about dir. and ind. objects would be greatly appreciated. SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE Quakertown, Pennsylvania Thu, Jan 14, 1999 GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE He decided something, and what is the "thing" that he decided? "to call Lisa." So that infinitive phrase is the object of your main clause. The rest of the sentence tells us why he did that.
QUESTION Dear Grammar,
What does "makes no representation" in the following sentence mean?The publisher makes no representation that it is absolutely accurate or complete.Thanks.SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE Bangkok, Thailand Fri, Jan 15, 1999 GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE That's lawyer talk for "the publisher never said" (or implied or suggested or wrote or hinted in any way, shape, or form).
QUESTION I'm hoping I have come up with a compound-complex sentence, consisting of at least two main clauses and one subordinate clause. Would you please take a peek at it and let me know if it is correct? If not, could you please show me where my errors are and suggest a way to fix it? Thank you, Thank you !!! Inasmuch as the rooster was loud, his crowing rarely disturbed the neighbors, and he was allowed the grace to remain in our coop.SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE Unknown Fri, Jan 15, 1999 GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE That's fine, except I'd use "although" instead of that clumsy "inasmuch as." (In fact, I think the "inasmuch as" violates the sense of your sentence.) "The grace" is a bit of a stretch, too. The although clause is subordinate, and then you've got two independent clauses connected with a comma and a coordinating conjunction.
QUESTION Is block style in paragraphs now the accepted rule? Or should I still indent my paragraphs? If I am required to indent, how many spaces should I set my tab for? Thanks
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE Ooltawah, Tennessee Fri, Jan 15, 1999 GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE In single-spaced text, block style works fine, especially in correspondence. In academic text, where you've got double-spacing, indents work much better (the double-space blocks between double-spaced paragraphs come out really big and clumsy). The tab is set for half an inch, which, on an old-fashioned typewriter, is five spaces (if I recall what I learned in my high-school typing class correctly).
QUESTION Hi there,
I'm gathering information on "topic sentence" to use with elementary teachers. How can we avoid 'announcement' sentences, and teaching gimmic/generic sentences to use as topic sentences.Thanks
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE Westminster, Maryland Fri, Jan 15, 1999 GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE How, indeed. I don't necessarily recommend avoiding "announcement sentences"; instead, embrace the evil. When the writer says, "The purpose of my paper is to reveal the hypocrisy of congressional leadership in bringing charges against the president." or "The purpose of this paper is to reveal. . . ." that helps the writer see what he or she is about to do. It's OK. She should go ahead and write it that way. But then, when she rewrites the paper, she must get rid of the "announcement" part of it. It's done its job; it has helped her focus -- and assured her that she does, indeed, have a focus. But it's not necessary, really, for the reader. What the reader needs is the real topic sentence, which might begin "The hypocrisy of the congressional leadership in bringing charges against the president can be demonstrated in four ways." Well, something better than that, I hope. But I find it helpful to allow students to write the gimmicky, announcement-type thesis statement -- and then go back to get rid of the announcer's tone, the gimmick. For this to be effective, of course, students have to know what we mean by an "announcement of the thesis."
QUESTION Here is an example I came across: "I know the thief to be him." The reasoning goes that since the pronoun is linked to the direct object in the sentence, it should be in the objective case. The usual rule, I believe, is that a pronoun following a linking verb is in the nominative case. What do you think? SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE Unknown Fri, Jan 15, 1999 GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE Tough question. If we put a verb there instead of the infinitive, would we say, "I know the thief is he."? In all but the most formal prose, the use of the nominative after a linking verb is losing ground fast. (When someone comes to the door, we say, "It's him!" and very few people would say [albeit correctly], "It's he!") I would use "him" at the end of your sentence. Of course, we're better off saying, "I know he's the thief." to begin with. Authority: The New Fowler's Modern English Usage edited by R.W. Burchfield. Clarendon Press: Oxford, England. 1996. in the article on "be"
QUESTION Which sentence is correct? Thank you
- He paid as MUCH as ten dollars.
- He paid as MANY as ten dollars.
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE Hyogo, Japan Fri, Jan 15, 1999 GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE We'd use "as much as ten dollars" because we're thinking of the ten dollars as a lump sum, a singular quantity of money.
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