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QUESTION
When using the abbreviation for "incorporated"--Inc.--in a technical report, is it always followed by a comma? As an example: "Whirligigs, Inc. produced three million units."
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Seattle, Washington Wed, Oct 28, 1998
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
According to the Chicago Manual of Style, the Inc. is simply dropped in straight text. Yes, the "inc." is preceded by a comma -- usually -- but there are companies that do not put a comma there, and your use of the comma ought to be consistent with company policy (if you're going to use it at all). (Rather like the comma that sometimes comes between a last name and Jr., but sometimes doesn't.)

Authority: Chicago Manual of Style 14th ed. U of Chicago P: Chicago. 1993. p. 464.


QUESTION
I need help in regard to something called cause and effect.Can you help me?
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Los Angeles, California Wed, Oct 28, 1998
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
I assume you're talking about a cause-and-effect essay. Consult the major section on Principles of Composition, especially the section on "Patterns of Composition" and, in particular, the digital handout on cause-and-effect essays.

QUESTION
Which is correct?
  1. The information we provided to you in January is now incorrect.
  2. The information we provided you with in January is now incorrect.
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Toronto, Ontario, Canada Wed, Oct 28, 1998
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
The dictionaries I use seem to permit either usage. The first sentence avoids the two prepositions on top of each other ("with in"), and I would prefer it for that reason. But the second sentence is certainly not incorrect.

Authority for this note: WWWebster Dictionary, the World Wide Web edition of Merriam-Webster's Collegiate® Dictionary, Tenth Edition. Used with permission.


QUESTION
Dear Grammar,

Here I am again.

In our business, we use something called "pre-authorized" wires. My question is: does it need a hyphen? I've been arguing against it, but have not seen a compelling argument for or against it. All our corporate literature uses the hyphen. This leads to some awkward usage, particularly when we refer to "non-pre-authorized wires." Agghh! Too many hyphens for my taste.

Thanks in advance.

SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
San Dimas, California Wed, Oct 28, 1998
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
That's a lot of hyphens, but what are you going to do? The hyphen in pre-authorized is necessary because the word is initially difficult to recognize without the hyphen (with all those vowels stacking up there). (Perhaps not to you, but that's just because you use it all the time.) If you didn't have the vowels beginning "authorized," you could get away without the hyphen, as in prelatency, prepubescent, premalignant; but with the vowel, as in pre-adolescent, we need the hyphen.

QUESTION
Does the word "sales" take a singular or plural verb in the following usages?
  1. Widget sales was/were 1% below last year.
  2. Specialized widget sales was/were down this month.
  3. Total widget sales was/were 3.5% higher than last quarter.
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Canyon Country, California Wed, Oct 28, 1998
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
If we create a really simple sentence, we usually come up with the right choice for situations like this: "Sales are up this year." Sales is plural, so we want were in all those senteces.

QUESTION
Hi, I don't really under stand Simple Predicates And Compound predicates. I have asked my teacher and she explaned it to me but I still don't understand. Please help me as best as you can. We had a test on them and I did really bad!! Thanks a bunch.
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Somewhere, Missouri Wed, Oct 28, 1998
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
If you can understand what a predicate is you're ahead of most people. It's simply the rest of the sentence -- whatever is not the subject. Sometimes that predicate is doubled (or tripled, whatever):
  • I know that the students are trying hard.
  • I know that they will probably do well.
  • I know that the students are trying AND that they will probably do well.
Or it can be simpler than that and still be a compound predicate, as when verbs are compounded:
  • Brittany is working hard this semester.
  • Brittany will do well.
  • Brittany is working hard AND will do well this semester.
See the new section on Sentence-Combining Skills.

QUESTION
Is it true that affect is always used as a verb and effect is always used as a noun? These are very confusing, as you have noted by including them in your list of "notorious confusables." However, I'm still confused.
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Franklin, Massachusetts Wed, Oct 28, 1998
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
Well, it's almost true: always is a bit of stretch. We use effect as a verb in the usage "The college effected a change in its withdrawal policy." And psychologists use affect as a noun when they talk about the way the human body takes on a certain expression: "the typical affect of the juvenile delinquent." But 99% of the time, you're right: effect is a noun and affect is a verb.

QUESTION
Which word _ "of" or "about"_ is correct in this sentence:
"I hate it," he said of/about the wallpaper.
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Unknown Wed, Oct 28, 1998
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
I'm not too keen on either; I think I'd prefer "I hate it," he said, referring to the wallpaper. Given the choice you give us, though, I think of is preferred. He doesn't really say this about the wallpaper, he says it of the wallpaper (as in "Tears in his eyes, he spoke of home.").

QUESTION
I need an explanation on adverbial clauses. An example is
Some geysers shoot water into the air, while others just bubble up from the ground.
I need to know what the adverbial clause is and what it modifies.
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
San Francisco, California Wed, Oct 28, 1998
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
See the section on Clauses. An adverbial clause usually modifies the verb of the dependent clause, telling us when, where, why, under what conditions that verb happens or is. In your sentence, the adverbial clause (beginning with "while") is telling us under what conditions "some geysers shoot water into the air." So it's modifying the verb shoot. (It's not exactly the same thing as telling us when they shoot water into the air, but almost.)

QUESTION
Which sentence is correct?
  1. The theme that is expressed is people need to respect others.
  2. The theme expresses people need to respect others.
  3. The theme is expressed when the dog jumps over the barn.
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Taegu, Korea Wed, Oct 28, 1998
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
Grammatically, the third sentence is fine, but I'm not sure it makes sense. The first sentence is a bit wordy, but it would be OK if we added "that" after the verb "is." Perhaps we could say that "The theme [of this story ?] is that people need to respect others." Since a theme is an expression (or what the piece of art expresses), it seems a bit redundant to say that a theme expresses anything.

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