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QUESTION
When writing a long quotation that is divided into several paragraphs, but is spoken by only one person, where do you locate quotation marks?
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Sterling, Illinois Mon, Oct 19, 1998
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
You have an opening quotation mark at the beginning of each paragraph, but you never actually close the quotation with a closing quotation mark until the person finally shuts up. See one of Joseph Conrad's short stories where the "overheard" narrator goes on paragraph after paragraph, page after page, with each paragraph begun with a quotation mark, but the closing quotation doesn't come until the end.

QUESTION
Need the name of as many linking verbs as you possibly can name
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Houston, Texas Mon, Oct 19, 1998
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
Start with the verb "to be" and then add the verbs of sense: to smell, to feel, to taste, etc. Then there are seems, becomes, grows, remains. Now you're on your own.

QUESTION
What would "past modals of deduction" fall under. I have looked up modals but haven't been able to find the "deduction" part. What would be an example of this structure? Thanks for your help.
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Toronto, Ontario, Canada Mon, Oct 19, 1998
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
[E-Mail Icon]Fact is, I have no idea. I will place an e-mail icon here in the hopes that someone else will know and send us a note.

QUESTION
Last Monday the haitian club held its first meeting. Is this right?
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Liothonia, Georgia Tue, Oct 20, 1998
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
No, I'm sure the Haitian Club would appreciate capitalizing its name. I would put a comma after "Last Monday," too, but it's not really wrong not to.

QUESTION
My five-year-old daughter said, "I will hold the dog here for she won't go in there."

Now I know that sentence is incorrect, but nobody seems to be able to explain why.

Would you?

SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania Tue, Oct 20, 1998
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
It's certainly unusual for your five-year-old to use "for" in that way. In fact, it's unusual for anyone to use "for" in that way. But I certainly don't see anything wrong with it; in fact, it's quite extraordinary (assuming the difference between "here" and "there" is clear in context). If I were writing the sentence, I'd want to put a comma after "here."

Please send your daughter to Hartford to take my college English classes -- now.


QUESTION
Do I have to capitalize the s in southern Mesopotamia?

Thanks!

SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Shelton, Connecticut Tue, Oct 20, 1998
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
No, not unless it's the name of an actual geographical or political entity. If it's merely an adjective indicating direction, don't capitalize it.

QUESTION
What's the difference between: (two people speaking about the third one)
  • - Has Mary been bathing?
  • - Has Mary bathed?
and
  • (wife to her husband coming late at night)
    You have been drinking!
  • You have drunk!
Are they all possible and what is the difference?
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Opole, Poland Tue, Oct 20, 1998
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
The "been bathing" could mean that Mary is still sitting in the bathtub; the "bathed" asks if she is finished with the task. "You have drunk" is not what we mean here. If I drink a glass of milk, I could say "I have drunk the milk." "You are drunk" might mean the same as "You have been drinking!" (Although some folks argue that you can be not quite drunk and still have been drinking -- just don't try to tell that to the traffic cop.)

QUESTION
Could you tell me the correct way to make an acronym plural? For instance, if I shorten the words tenant improvements to TI, is the correct spelling TIs or TI's? I always thought it was the latter.
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Conifer, Colorado Tue, Oct 20, 1998
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
The tendency in modern journalism seems to be against using the apostrophe to form plurals. Thus we now write 1920s, not 1920's. As long as you can avoid confusion, do the same with acronyms. Whether or not that applies to TIs, I leave up to you. Frankly, it looks a bit odd to me, so I'd add the apostrophe.

Authority: Chicago Manual of Style 14th ed. U of Chicago P: Chicago. 1993. p. 197.


QUESTION
What is the proper way to write:
  1. "But I don't understand why you can't use the present tense."
  2. "But I don't understand why can't you use the present tense."
Could you explain why or refer me to the paragraph on your site, please.
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Somewhere, Russia Tue, Oct 20, 1998
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
The first version is the correct way. You're not asking a question here, so an inversion of subject and auxiliary verb (as you have in the second version) is not appropriate. (If you omitted "But I don't understand," you'd have a question, and the inverted order would be appropriate.)

QUESTION
I'm trying to figure out the proper use of the term Masters, when referring to someone's degree. Do you say:
  • He earned a Master of Fine Arts or
  • He earned a Master's of Fine Arts or
  • He earned a Masters of Fine Arts
SOURCE OF QUESTION & DATE OF RESPONSE
Davidson, North Carolina Tue, Oct 20, 1998
GRAMMAR'S RESPONSE
In referring in a general way to an academic degree like that, we don't capitalize it at all. You could say he earned a master's degree or a master of fine arts or a master's. After his name, you would write, Firstname Lastname, M.F.A.

Authority: Chicago Manual of Style 14th ed. U of Chicago P: Chicago. 1993. p. 244.


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